I like how you made the girl's outfit big and almost leathery. It gives that sense of monstrousity but the feminine face also gives room for attention of security of approaching her with no fear. Very nice
Personally, I love the corset/waist wrap clothing's design, and especially how you've painted her hips and legs. Something about having things set/drawn in a way when it comes to leg armor or just anything around the thigh area always makes it more sensual to me.